R1: Retrieval & Literal Comprehension
Finding and extracting explicit information from texts - what the text directly states.
Finding and extracting explicit information from texts - what the text directly states.
Retrieval questions ask you to:
These questions ask you to list specific details from a text. They're worth 4 marks - 1 mark for each correct point.
Look in detail at lines 1-10. List four things you learn about the narrator's surroundings.
You should write your answer as a list, using full sentences or bullet points.
Circle the correct option - the answer is directly stated in the text.
Which of these statements is TRUE? Shade the correct circle.
Summarise the differences or similarities between two texts.
Use details from both sources to write a summary of the differences between the two writers' experiences.
Quickly move your eyes over the text to locate specific keywords related to the question.
Read quickly to get the gist of each paragraph before looking for specific details.
If the question gives line numbers, read those lines carefully first.
Top Tips:
The narrator is in a dark, dusty attic.
There are boxes stacked against the walls.
A single window lets in dim light.
The air smells of old books and mothballs.
It's dark.
There's stuff there.
A window.
Smells.
| Mistake | Why It's Wrong | How to Fix It |
|---|---|---|
| Using inference when retrieval is asked for | You're guessing instead of finding what's stated | Find the exact information in the text |
| Quoting too much | You lose marks for copying whole sections | Select only the relevant words |
| Not answering all parts of the question | You might miss easy marks | Check you've listed the right number of points |
| Repeating the same point | You won't get marks for saying the same thing twice | Make each point different |
| Analysing language when asked to retrieve | That's a different question type | Just find and state the facts |
Q1: When answering a "List four things" question, should you use your own words or copy the text exactly?
Q2: What's the difference between retrieval and inference?
Q3: How long should you spend on AQA Paper 1 Q1?
Q4: What two strategies can you use to quickly find information in a text?
Time management: Q1 (Paper 1) = 5 minutes for 4 marks. Q1 (Paper 2) = 2 minutes for 4 marks. Q2 (Paper 2) = 10 minutes for 8 marks.
What examiners look for: Accurate information taken directly from the text, clear expression of each point as a complete idea, and four distinct points that don't repeat the same detail in different words.
Students often try to infer when the question asks for retrieval, reading between the lines instead of finding what is directly stated. Wrong: "The character probably feels lonely because she lives alone." Correct: "The character lives alone in a 'small flat on the outskirts of town.'"
Students often copy huge chunks of text instead of selecting the key detail. Wrong: Quoting an entire paragraph to make one point. Correct: Extracting the specific detail and rephrasing in your own words.
Students often make the same point twice using different wording. Wrong: "It was raining heavily" and "There was a downpour." Correct: Making each point about a different detail from the text.
4 marks: Look in detail at lines 1-8. List four things you learn about the setting from this part of the source.
The setting is a remote coastal village, described as "perched on the edge of the cliff" which suggests it is dangerously close to the sea below. The houses are old and weather-worn, with "whitewashed walls peeling in the salt wind," indicating they have long been exposed to harsh coastal conditions. There is a single narrow road leading into the village, implying it is isolated and difficult to reach. The harbour below contains only "a handful of fishing boats," revealing that fishing is a key but small-scale industry in the community.
Mark scheme: 1 mark for each valid point identified from the specified lines. Points must be distinct and accurately reflect information stated in the text. Own words or close paraphrase accepted.
AO1 requires you to "identify and interpret explicit information and ideas." For retrieval, the key word is explicit - the information must be directly stated, not implied. At grade 5, students can find relevant details but may present them vaguely or repeat the same point. At grade 9, students demonstrate precise selection of information, expressing each point as a fully developed idea in their own words, and ensuring every point is distinct. The difference between grade 5 and grade 9 is often clarity and precision: grade 9 responses show the examiner that the student has truly understood what the text states, rather than just copied fragments without comprehension.
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